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Good news! My best friend is going to get married next May! and I see she is really nervous and me too but I don't know why! jaja I hope she will be happy because her boyfriend is a cool guy and he loves her, like I never saw before! I'll be her maid of honor so I need an awsome outfit, what do you think about? I'm thinking in a light blue dress, she doesn't choose clothing to her maids of honor so we are free to wear any color also the wedding will be in the morning. =)

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Good news!

My best friend is going to get married next May! and I see that she is really nervous.  So am I  and me too but I don't do not know why! jaja

I hope she will be happy because her boyfriend is a cool guy and he loves her. like I never saw before! 1 Never have I seen such much love showered upon another.


I'll will be her maid of honor and so I need an awsome outfit.  , What do you think about? I'm am thinking in of a light blue dress.  She doesn't choose does not dictate the color of the clothing to her maids of honor wear and so we are free to wear any color.  also The wedding will be held in the morning. =)

In answering your question, it is always polite to ask her and REMEMBER, never to outshine the bride!  Wearing bright red would be out of the question even though you have free reign to do so.  A light blue dress is very appropriate, elegant and not to outshine the bride.  It's her day after all.  You won't want others to outshine you on your special day too :)

Do not use contractions such as I’m, she’ll, they’re, etc. They are for writing and recording dialogues; used in informal settings such as private mails etc.  It is frowned upon in formal essays which I treat all notebook entries as such. One needs to be able to master and write proper English first before all else.  If you write in such a way and become so used to it that when you write your resumes etc, your applications will be rejected on sight.  This is my advice to you.  People perceive how you speak.  If they can't, they will judge you on how you write before granting you an interview.  I treat all comments as informal and so I use slang, contractions etc here.

 

1.   The way you wrote can be construed like you are jealous of your friend!

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Well in the day time go for light colours.Light blue sounds perfectly fine:)
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Good news!

My best friend is going to get married next May! and I see that she is really nervous and me I am too, but I don't know why! jaja

 

I hope that she will be happy because her boyfriend is a cool guy and he loves her, like/in a way that I never saw/have never seen before! I'll be her maid of honor so I need an awesome outfit,. wWhat do you think about? I'm thinking in of wearing a light blue dress,. sShe doesn't choose the clothes/dresses/outfits for clothing to her maids of honor so we are free to wear any color. aAlso, the wedding will be in the morning. =)

 

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This is a good effort! You might want to break up your sentences more often. Maybe you would want to construct them so that only one idea is expressed in each sentence. The notes in blue are suggestions; those in red are corrections.

Congrats on this good news!

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So nice! :)) Congratulations for your friend! :)

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