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The One Man and His Monkeys Capitalize all first letters of the words in a title.
Today, I want to cook make "火锅". I do not know the English word for it. It is called "hot pot" or "steamboat" in English. It is also known as "shabu shabu", the Japanese term for it in the US. How to say the "火锅"? I don't know. "火锅" It is a kind of style of Chinese cooking style. food. It uses a big pot, make a delicious soup, and put the where different kinds of meat and vegetables are cooked in the a tasty soup. The soup need must always be boiling. When the meat and vegetables are cooked, you can take it them from the pot and eat them in nto your bowl and eat it. The food cooked in this way is delicious. But it's common peppery hot, Those from the western regions of China is commonly very spicy and not everyone will o maybe not everyone like it. Cantonese styles are clear without any spice added. Usually they use plain water and let the flavours imbue into the water instead the way of cooking 清. Okay, come Now back to the main topic, and talk about the man and his monkeys. 1
When I walked to the wet market, ( It's just a place for sell the meat and vegetables, I don't know how to say it in English.) I saw the group of people on my way. I didn't know what happen. But they who were quiet and thought no big deal about it but as I neared them, I sensed there was something unusual going on. , so I thought maybe not a big matter. When I closed them, I just knew what happen. In fact, They were watchinged the a show. There was a man and with four monkeys performing an actmade the show. The man ordered the monkeys, then The monkeys did something follow performed what the man had told them. s orders. It's Just like you oreder making your dog do some tricks. gy, and your doggy will run, stand, lie, jump or anything else. But the monkeys? You know, It isn't is not common. , The man's order was funny because it's like a man talk he acted as if he was talking to four people.So it was funny. I didn't not stay too long before I started to continue on. here, just walked by, I just listened the man talk to the monkey-- Just listen to the words, "You all must study hard, mustn't only want to play and be wicked...". The monkeys are liked the elementary shool's students, and pupils and the man, like a teacher.
When I was very young, sometimes I meet saw this kind of shows, but it is extremely rare nowadays. now, it's very difficult meeting again. The man needed the show to live and the monkeys needed the show to be fed. When I walked away, I thought I should give 2 gave some money for him and his monkeys. I hope the show will be existence continue to exist in the future. I think the kids will be happy to see this. I should know, I was a kid once... like me, when I was a kid...
When I was a kid, I too saw something like this but with a monkey on the back of a goat or dog. 獁騮(猴子)騎狗戲
1. Excellent introduction!
2. I have changed the meaning of your sentence to match with your conclusion. Otherwise it is a contradiction. 頭尾不合, 文章之缺
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