My Mother..

My mother is currently working in for the Proton Edar Company. Her position in the company as a sales executive makes her a very busy person. Every Each day, she will wakes up early in the morning and arrive back at return home late at night. Due to My parents were divorced when I was 10 ten years old. , She is both my a mother and my a father to me and my. I have 5 five siblings. She has a big huge responsibility to take care all of us by herself.  but somehow in the world No matter what, she manages to do it just perfectly. I remembered that when I was a kid younger, she used to be was very strict with me mother; she will would scold me and punished me for my indiscretions.  mistake. But Now that I am older, now she has become is more relax and gentle; . If I make mistake Instead of scolding, she will give an gives me advice instead of scold me. I wish she can retire early because I want to see her enjoying time as a folks so that she can enjoy life more.  I love you so damn much mother!

As Randy said, you write quite well.  I mean in the sense of trying to convey your emotions and not in terms of the mechanics and grammar of the language.  However you need better vocabulary and phraseology to really express yourself.  Also don't use swear words when there are other alternatives.  Finally you don't need to spell out everything when it is already implied in the context.  For example, not need to specify "mother" when a simple "she" will do.  We already know that you are writing about your mother.

My Mother..

My mother is currently working in the Proton Edar Company. Her position in the company as a sales executive makes her a very busy person. Every day she will wakes up early in the morning and arrives back at home late at night. Due to my parents' divorce when I was 10 ten years old, she is has been my mother and my father. I have 5 five siblings. SheMy mother has a big responsibility to take care of all of us by herself, but somehow in the world she manages to do it just perfectly. I remember that when I was a kid she used to be a strict mother; she will scolded me and punished me for my mistakes. But now she has become more relaxed and gentle. If I make a mistake, she will gives an advice instead of scolding me. I wish she can could retire early, because I want to see her enjoying her time as a ordinary folks. I love you so damn much, Mother!

You write well.