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Awesome! Last two weeks, I went for a leadership camp at Lopo Village, Hulu Klang, Selangor with the others participants. At first, I didn't enjoy that camp but 3 days there made me felt too impressive. Although we had to run, screaming like a nut, eat our lunch under the hot sun but, it just great! Being in that camp made me realized that there were many people outside that don't have the same abilities with us but, we must respect and accept them for who they are. It's just a simple thing; respect others and so they will respect us. I was in Eagle group with 6 members whereas 4 boys and 2 girls include me. Sometimes, I found it's quite difficult to communicate with them as I've never meet them before but sincerely, they were awesome! How can I deny that fact when I had felt in love with them only in 3 days? It's the first time I found people that only smiled when I had made some mistakes, always calm me down when I got angry, and help me when I'm in trouble. During that camp, we had to make our own cap and wore it through the camp. I have to admit that I'm a careless team member as I had lost my cap for 5 times but, I'm lucky that my team members always with me. They smiled and said, " Ain, it's okay. As long we still alive, we will help you". My tears dropped. I just knew them in 3 days but, they were too kind for me. The most hardest part was the last day. I know that, after this we'll never meet again as all of us will be busy with our study but, I really want to say that they were awesome! I’m truly in love with them.

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Awesome!

Two weeks ago, I went for a leadership camp at Lopo Village, Hulu Klang, Selangor with the other participants. At first, I didn't enjoy that camp but 3 days there made me feel very impressed. Although we had to run, screaming like nuts, eat our lunch under the hot sun but, it was just great! Being in that camp made me realize that there were many people outside that don't have the same abilities as with us but, we must respect and accept them for who they are. It's just a simple thing; respect others and so they will respect us.

I was in Eagle group with 6 members, 4 boys and 2 girls including me. Sometimes, I found it quite difficult to communicate with them as I've never met them before but sincerely, they were awesome! How can I deny that fact when I had felt in love with them only in only 3 days? It's the first time I found people that only smiled when I had made some mistakes.  They always calmed me down when I got angry, and helped me when I'm was in trouble. (Why switch to present tense?)

During that camp, we had to make our own cap and wear  it through the camp. I have to admit that I'm a careless team member as I had lost my cap for 5 times but, I'm lucky that my team members were always with me. They smiled and said, " Ain, it's okay. As long we are still alive, we will help you". My tears dropped. I just knew them for in 3 days but, they were so too kind for to me. The most hardest part was the last day. I know that, after this we'll never meet again as all of us will be busy with our study but, I really want to say that they were awesome! I’m truly in love with them.

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