Waiting mechanically.(first part)
(let's make it more like local english literature!this one I translate from Chinese.)
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Dun, I hope you wear that shirt with green and white stripes today, revealing your long neck. You always don't like washing hair, and it sticks into wisps coiling occupy your head.Aren't you uncomfortable?As you see,the other boys,their black hair dance in the wind, how nice it is. You don't have to come in a hurry,you can use your "GREEN BEAN“ blower to dry it, then pace out of your house comfortably.Don't worry it will affect your grade in next month text indirectly. You brain also need a break sometimes,doesn't it?What is your mother doing now?Rolling her hair?I'm sure you would throw off slippers and walk gingerly to the door,then slip away stealthily.
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Waiting ("writing"?) mechanically. (First part)
(Let's make it more like local/native English literature!-------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
Dun, I hope you wear that shirt with the green and white stripes
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