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Lunar New Year Fair In every Chinese Lunar New Year, one of our activities is going to Lunar New Year Fair. This year is Dragon's year, so the Lunar New Year Fair will decorate with Dragon design. And we will have Lunar New Year Fair held at every district in Guangzhou so that members of the public can go there convenience. It is said that if you go to the Lunar New Year Fair on New Year's Eve, you will be lucky in the next year. Also you can drive away the villains, if you wear new shoes. But this year I didn't wear new shoes. They were always new when I entry the Fair and became old when I came out. Because the fair was very crowded, I only can inched through teeming streets. Even then that, I still like to go the Lunar New Year Fair. The venders will sell special things to attract people. I always can find something new. This year they planted the vegetables into flowerpots and sold them. It's very creative and funny. They really attracted many people to buy some. Besides that, the flowers and Windmills are very popular as usual. I love Lunar New Year Fair. I hope everyone have a happy New Year of Dragon!

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Lunar New Year Fair

In every Chinese Lunar New Year, one of our activities is going to the Lunar New Year Fair. This year is the dragon's year, so the Lunar New Year Fair will be decorated with dragon designs. We will have the Lunar New Year Fair held at every district in Guangzhou so that members of the public can go there conveniently. It is said that if you go to the Lunar New Year Fair on New Year's Eve, you will be lucky in the next year. Also, you can drive away the villains if you wear new shoes. This year I didn't wear new shoes. They were always new when I entered the fair and became old when I came out. Due to the fair being very crowded, I only inched through teeming streets. Even so, I still like to go the Lunar New Year Fair. The venders sell special things to attract people. I always can find something new. This year they planted the vegetables into flowerpots and sold them. It's very creative and funny. They really attracted many people to buy some. Besides that, the flowers and windmills are very popular as usual. I love Lunar New Year Fair. I hope everyone has a happy New Year of Dragon!

 

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Lunar New Year's Fair

During Chinese Lunar New Year, one of my family's activities is going to the Lunar New Year's Fair. This is the Year of the Dragon, so the Lunar New Year Fair will have dragon designs. There will be a Lunar New Year Fair held at every district in Guangzhou so that members of the public can easily attend a fair conveniently.

It is said that if one goes to the Lunar New Year Fair on New Year's Eve, one will be successful in the next year. It is also said that if one wears new shoes, one can avoid the villains, but sadly, this year, I did not wear new shoes. The reason being is that in the past, my shoes were always relatively new when I first entered the Fair, but they quickly became "old" by the time I came out!

As the fair is extremely crowded, I could only manage to inch my way through its teeming streets, all the while, having my feet constantly stepped upon! Despite that, I still enjoy going to the Lunar New Year Fair. The venders always sell unusual things to attract people, and I always can find something new.

This year, they planted the vegetables into flowerpots and sold them. They did it in a highly creative and entertaining way, and they succeeded in attracting many people to buy some of their products. Besides those flowerpots, the flowers and windmills were exceedingly popular as usual.

I love the Lunar New Year's Fair! I hope that everyone has a happy New Year of the Dragon!

Tracy, yet another good essay! Again, apologies for the quick corrections, but you already knw why! LOL! Also, I didn't change or correct it, since I wasn't 100% sure, but is "villains" the same as "bad luck?" As always, should you have any questions about why I changed things, please ask me! - J.

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