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time flies There are almost 7 monthes after i graduated. Life is totally different with the life in the university. I am geting used to the new life here in suzhou.During the 7 monthes,a lot of thing happened,i just like a kid then grow up suddently in these 7 monthes. I met a lot new friends here.That makes my life more beautiful. The reason why i come to this website is almost same as a lot chinese girl .That is I want to make my english better and better.But i still have other purpose that is i hope i can meet some new UK ,USA and Canada friends.Because i really like UK very much,,As USA and Canada,they are the place i want to travel one day in the future.Hope these dreams can be came true one day

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Flying the time. / My time is flying.

 

 

Almost seven months ago I have completed my graduated. The life is totally different in the time of university life. I am now getting to start the new life in Suzhou. I had much happen here, during these seven months. I just like a kid, and then I’m growing here in this time. I made a lot of new friends here. They made my life more beautiful. The reason; when I came in this website I saw here, much more Chinese girls all most like me. For this reason, I'm trying to improve English Language my level best. But I hope in this purpose, I'll meet some new friends from UK, USA and Canada. I really like the UK is very much. If possible to me, I'll travel USA and Canada. I hope my dream must be true once a day in near future.

 

 

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time flies Tempus Fugit

There are Almost 7 monthes after i seven months after I had graduated, . I find life is totally so vastly different than the life in academiawith the life in the university. However, I am geting used to the new life here in Suzhou.  During the 7 monthes,a lot of thing Much had happened since then.  I am just like a kid then grow up suddently in such a short time period.these 7 monthes. I met a lot many new friends here.That makes  - making my life more wonderful beautiful.


The reason why i  I come to this website is almost same as a lot chinese like most Chinese girls .That is I want to make improve my English better and better.But i However, I still have other another purpose that is i hope i can meet some new friends from the UK, USA and Canada friends.Because i I really like the UK very much would be able to travel to the ,,As USA and Canada,they are the place i want to travel one day in the future. Hope these dreams can be come true one day.

1.  我 = I.  No exception

2.  You need to know you punctuation spacing rules.  See

http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/Mechanics%20Of%20The%20English%20Language.htm

3.  You need to know your capitalization rules.  See

http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/On%20Capitalization.htm


 

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