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Remark I returned home two hours instead of twenty minutes tonight. All day it snowed. I dag my car from snow and went to home. It was a lot of cars and crashs on the road. The traffic was nine points from ten.

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I returned home two hours instead Instead of the usual of twenty minutes to get home, it took me two hours tonight!. All day it snowed and I have to dig my car out from the snow first and went to home.
It was a lot of cars and crashs on the road. The traffic was horrendous with many accidents.  The traffic was nine points from ten.

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It took me two hours to get home tonight, instead of the usual twenty minutes tonight. It's been snowing all day. I had to dig my car out of the snow snow before driving home.
The traffic was heavy and there were many crashes. Nine out of ten for congestion tonight.

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I returned home after two hours instead of twenty minutes tonight. All day it snowed. I had dug my car out of the snow then came to home.
There were a lot of cars and even accidents on the road. The traffic would have been at ninety percent from ten.

A lot of this was understandable, but only after guessing what you really meant. Check the alternatives we have offered. 

PS. Nine out of ten is a positive judgement. ;)

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It took two hours instead of twenty minutes to get home tonight. It snowed all day. I dug my car out of snow to get home.
There was a lot of cars and accidents on the road. The traffic level was nine out of ten.

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yes) I was going slowly , so I'm keeping)))

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