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The flowers of war today my best friend and i went to cinema to see "The flowers of war".Chinese name of this movie is 金陵十三钗,this story is happened in my city-Nanjing. I am sorry about my poor english,i don't know how to express my feeling in english:这是一部以战争为背景的片子,那场战争真实的存在过,就发生在我的生活的城市,我的家乡,以至于我会感觉一切都是那么的真切,心是那么的痛。 看片过程中,我流了很多泪,可以说我是哭着看完整部片子的。身为一个南京人,我热爱我的家乡,爱这里的一切,我不痛恨日本人,那不是他们的错,是战争让原本美好的一切都变了。 真心的祝福这世上的每一个人都可以开心快乐的生活,远离战争的硝烟。。。

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落后就要被挨打呀!
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My first lesson to you is to learn the capitalization rules of English!  If you don't know see

http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/On%20Capitalization.htm

If you don't understand, ask. :)

The flowers of war

today my best friend and i went to cinema to see "The flowers of war".Chinese name of this movie is 金陵十三钗,this story is happened in my city-Nanjing.
I am sorry about my poor english,i don't know how to express my feeling in english:这是一部以战争为背景的片子,那场战争真实的存在过,就发生在我的生活的城市,我的家乡,以至于我会感觉一切都是那么的真切,心是那么的痛。
看片过程中,我流了很多泪,可以说我是哭着看完整部片子的。身为一个南京人,我热爱我的家乡,爱这里的一切,我不痛恨日本人,那不是他们的错,是战争让原本美好的一切都变了。
真心的祝福这世上的每一个人都可以开心快乐的生活,远离战争的硝烟。。。

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