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What makes me study English. I have some dreams. First,I'd like to talk to many people in over the world. Second,I want to work and live in Europe. The reason is that I like European culture. Third.I want to marry European woman. Fourth,my college sends college in Finland final grade students. I want to become the students.

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What makes me study English.

I have some dreams.
First,I'd like to talk to many people all over the world.

Second,I want to work and live in Europe.
The reason is that I like European culture.

Third.I want to marry a European woman.

Fourth,my college sends college in Finland final grade students.
I want to become the students.

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What makes me study English.

I have some dreams.
Firstly, I'd like to talk to with many people in all over the world.

Secondly,I want to work and live in Europe.

The reason is that I like European culture.

Thirdly, I want to marry European woman.

Fourthly, my college sends college in Finland final grade students. I want to become the students. (My college would send senior to college in Finland as exchange student, and I want to be one of them.)

Except "firstly, secondly, thirdly…",  we can also use firstly, besides, moreover, furthermore as conj.

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Nice job! Your English is pretty good! ごくろ!タカさんの英語のことが上手です!
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Why I study English.

I have some dreams.
First, I'd like to talk to many people all over the world.

Second, I want to work and live in Europe. One reason for this is that I like European culture.

Third. I want to marry a European woman.

Fourth, my college sends some senior year students to a college in Finland.
I would like to be one of those students.

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