tell you who am I A little about myself

My name is Dong Shiwei, I come from Henan Xuchang. I am 24 years old this year. I graduated from the Anyang Institute of Technology College in June this year majoring in and my major is computer software development, but. I love the Internet, I like web development, web promotion and being in the network world. I have met many good teachers and helpful friends, we talked about everything. After I graduated，I started work in a hair products factory--rebecca, my main job is in production management. But I don't like my job now, I it feels like a secretary. I think I'd be better off be engaged in computer software development or corporate network set up. I hope that I can be sent abroad soon and maybe then my English level can be improved faster very quickly.

thanks for you！

你的英文不错，加油！

tell you who am I Something About Myself 1.

My name is Dong Shiwei, I come from Henan Xuchang 2 in China. I am 24 years old this year. I had graduated from the Anyang Institute of Technology College in June of this year.  and My major is computer software development, but I love the Internet. I like web design and development, web promotion, in the network world, While in school, I met had many good teachers and helpful friends, we talked about everything. After graduation, I graduated, I worked in a hair products factory - in the management of production in Rebecca, a hair product company. my main job is production management. But I don't do not like my job now, as I it feels like a secretary. , I think I'd be better off be engaged working in computer software development or corporate network set up. , I hope that I can be sent abroad soon and, maybe hopefully my English level can be improved very quickly if English is widely used there.

thanks for you！ Thanks for reading.

What kind of software development did you learn in college?  Do you have any experience in writing compilers, operating systems or writing huge software system in school?

1.  Your title sounds a bit rude.  "I tell you" is more like a command.  It would be better to say, "I said to you."

2.  Sorry to say that your hometown is not as famous as Beijing, Hong Kong or Shanghai.  So you need to include the name of the country.