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Starting point "we are reading the first verse of the first chapter of a book whose pages are infinite……“ Although I do not know who wrote the words of such a philosophy,i always keep it in mind.and treat it as a reminder that the future can be angthing if i want to make it! we can take the mysterious,hazy future and carve out of it anything that we can imagine,just as a sculptor caves a statue from a shapeless stone. Everyone is a farmer,if you plant a good seed,you will reap a good harvest..If your seed is poor and full of weeds,you will reap a useless crop.. If you plant nothing at all,you will harvest nothing at all! I want to the future will be better than the past. I donot want it contaminated by the mistakes and errors with which history is failed.we should be concerned about the future because that is where we will spend the remainder of our lives! The past is gone and static. nothing i can do to change it. the future is before me and dynamic. Everything i do will affect it. .Each day bring with it new frontiers, in my homes and in my business, If i only recognize them. I am just at the beginning of the progress in every field of human endeavor!

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Starting point

"We are reading the first verse of the first chapter of a book whose pages are infinite……“
Although I do not know who wrote these words of such a philosophical nature, I always keep them in mind and treat it as a reminder that the future can be anything if I want to make it! We can take the mysterious, hazy future and carve out of it anything that we can imagine, just as a sculptor craves a statue from a shapeless stone. Everyone is a farmer, if you plant a good seed, you will reap a good harvest. If your seed is poor and full of weeds, you will reap a useless crop. If you plant nothing at all, you will harvest nothing at all!

I want to the future to be better than the past. I do not want it contaminated by the mistakes and errors with which history has made is failed. We should be concerned about the future because that is where we will spend the remainder of our lives! The past is gone and static. Nothing I can do can change it. But the future is before me and dynamic. Everything I do will affect it. Each day brings with it new frontiers, in my home and in my business, if i only recognize them. I am just at the beginning stage of the progress in every field of human endeavor!

That's very inspiring!  Most of my corrections are capitilization, punctuation, and spacing.  Although these things may seem trivial to some, I think that layout makes a big difference on how people treat your writing.  Even you write very well, a casual treatment of these aspects may cloud people's judgement of the writing quality.  Anyway, I think this was written well, thanks for posting!

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You must be successful. The success belongs you ,because you had the goal. Hopes your dream may come true.

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