what do you think about to be mature!?
Vacations is a sweet word to my ears. I really need it! I'm a student and I' ve a part time job in my father's office. I'm studing management at the college and at the same time I'm studing english. I'm studying for contests too. I don't have time to do things that I would like to do.. nowadays my life is too busy!!!
There are a time that everybody has to grow. This is my turn! I'm going to finish my college and found a good job, make some money and travel abroad. I don't want to be a millioner, I wish I had enough money to a dignified life, only.
Nobody has to die to work... we can enjoy our lifes with simples things. Go to the beach with some friends; spend a time with who you love; you can do it without money!!!
I think that to be mature you don't have to forget how life is good!
see you soon,
Sérgio Filho.
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what do you think about to be mature!?
Vacations is a sweet word to my ears. I really need it! I'm I am a student and I' ve have a part time job in my father's office.1 I'm I am studying management at the college and at the same time, I'm studing English. I'm studying for contests too2. I don't do not have time to do things that I would like to do. Nowadays my life is too busy!!!
There are is a time that when everybody has to grow up. This is my turn now! I'm am going to finish my college and found find a good job, make some money and travel abroad. I don't want No need to be a millioner millionaire, I wish I had enough money to live a dignified life, only.
Nobody has to die to for work... We can enjoy our lifes with simples things; going to the beach with some friends; spend a time with who you love ones and you can do it without much money!!!
I think that to be mature Growing up does not mean that you don't have to forget how good life is good can be!
See you soon,
Sérgio Filho.
Except for grammatical mistakes and the natural way of expressing in English, your writing is very good, mature and thoughts, cogent! Keep on writing and get corrected. Your English will improve greatly.
1. How cozy and convenient.
2. What do you mean by contests? Did you mean tests, exams etc.?
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It's great that you are working so hard for your projects. When you are a very busy student, you can't wait for vacations. I think you should profit your time now and then enjoy with your achievements in the near future. As a student you don't have a lot money but it's really nice to do things that you don't have to pay for and it's even better to share that time with your friends. So keep going! To be a matured person will depend on how you see and enjoy life.
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What do you think about to be mature!?
Vacations are a sweet word to my ears. I really need it! I am a student and have a part time job in my father's office. I am studying management at college and at the same time, English. I'm studying for contests too. I do not have time to do things that I would like to do. Nowadays my life is too busy!!!
There is a time when everybody has to grow up. This is my turn now! I am going to finish college and find a good job, make some money and travel abroad. No need to be a millionaire, enough money to live a dignified life.
Nobody has to die for work... We can enjoy life with simple things; going to the beach with friends; spend time with love ones and you can do it without much money!!! Growing up does not mean that you have to forget how good life can be!
See you soon,
Sérgio Filho.
CORRECTION BY JEFF
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