My Interview

Now, Let me introduce myself briefly, I come am from Shandong 1 Province, in China.   and I am 28 years old.  I obtained , Besides, I got my bachelor's degree in from Shandong University in 2007. I'm I am a software engineer who have with over four years of experience. In My first job, I worked for was with Zhong Chuang Software Enterprise. From 2009 to 2011, I worked for Qi Qun Software Enterprise. Now, I am now working for Archermind Science and Technology Enterprise. I am familar with C and C++C plus plus. and I'm very interested with My area of interest are in implementing Linux drivers. I think 2 I am a good team player and I'm a honesty man to others.3  In addition, I can work well under pressure. I wish we can cooperative with each other. I'm sorry that My oral English is not frently. That's all. Thank you! 4

1.  This is the new style.  If you want to use with the capital "D", then you must separate it with a blank.  Shan Dong.

2. Be more assertive.  If you are wishy washy, no one is going to believe in you for your words carry no weight.

3.  These sort of personal traits are superfluous.  Of course you are an honest person, otherwise why should I hire you in the first place.  This may be OK in Chinese but DEFINITELY NOT in English.

4.  I don't know the context of this note entry.  Are you writing a cover letter for a resume or just an introduction of yourself for an interview as your title suggests.  Anyway, your last line is no no.  Even if your English is bad, you don't advertise it so straight forward.  There should be no overly humility in an English resume.