First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi，everyone! Nice to meet you here. 

I am just interested in English and western culture, and want to improve my language skills as well. However, what I want most is to find a friend here, who also loves China and is interested in Chinese culture, especially Shanghai. Please contact with me!

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很好写的～

1. I crossed out just in "I am just interested . . . ", but it's not wrong. I think it might sound better to omit it here, but it's perfectly good English either way.

2. I changed skill to skills, but it's not actually a problem. I just think skills sounds better. 

3. The most things I want to do . . . Should be written: The thing I want to do most, but it's shorter and sometimes more natural to say The thing I want most, without to do. You can also say: What I'm most interested in is finding a friend here, which is probably what I would write.

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我这里用我的话写你的作文一遍 :)

Hey everyone! Nice to meet you all.

I'm interested in English and western culture, and want to improve my language skills as well. What I want most, though, is finding a friend who's interested in Chinese culture, and Shanghai especially.

Contact me, please!

这篇文本和你的明显有些不同；如果你有词汇或语法的问题，请来问我！

另：我对上海和上海话实在有兴趣～

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Hi，everyone！
nice to meet you here.
I am just interested in english and western culture,and I want to improve my language skills also too.
However ,the things i want to do most is find a friend here.

Who also loves China and is interested in Chinese Culture? especially Shanghai,pls contact with me!