First notebook entry: Introducing myself
No pains,no gains. Coffee of afternoon still works till midnight, every time when drink it, I feel exciting at night. Someone drink dark tea and have the same feeling, and for me, coffee has the same function.
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself
No pains,no gains. 1The effects of having coffee of in the afternoon still works continue till midnight. every Each time when I drink it, I feel exciting am still wide awake at night. Someone Those drinking dark tea and have also experience the same thing feeling, and for me, coffee has the same function.2
1. Wrong use of the idiom. Your essay did not show anything that you have gained something good after experiencing something that is not good. For example, "You must exercise hard everyday to have a great shape. No pain no gain! How do you expect to have a great body just by sitting down all day and eating bons bons."
2. This is redundant. You have told us in the beginning.
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