MYSELF

Hi! Well I'm going to write a bit about myself :) My name is Ángela and , i'm a teenager, (Usually when you include your age we can figure out that you're a teenager) I'm 16 years old. (It's better to split the two sentences instead of using too many commas!) I live in the north of Spain, in Cantabria. I live only with my mother and but during the weekends my mother's boyfriend come to our house and spends all the weekend with us. I live with 5 cats too and they are named: Kitty, Vicu, Gordi Louis, Enriqueta Alfonsa and Tigre. They live with me but stay in the garden outside of the house. I spend all my time dancing, singing and acting, and I love all of the scenic arts. I also play the guitar but last year I left quit taking my guitar classes.
Kisses

You have so many cats, haha! Also this was very good, just a few minor errors! Keep practicing and you will get better! :)