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First notebook entry: Introducing Myself.
Hello :)
My name's Nan. I'm 22 years old and I was born in BKK, Thailand. I like to travel and learn new things.
I'm an art student and I also work as a graphic designer in Thailand :)
I love listening to music, watching movies and reading good books.
I want to travel around the world, I want to meet good friends. My English is so-so, but I think someone on this site will help me_improve it :) ...Hi, nice to meet you...Good work with English, just keep practicing...You're right, there are a lot of helpful people on italki...Good luck!! :D
**Regards!! :D
First notebook entry: Introducing myself
Hello :)
I'm Nan. 22 years old from BKK Bangkok1, Thailand. I like to journey travel and meet learn new things.
I'm am 2an art student and graphic designer in Thailand 3 :)
I love music, movies and good books.
I want to journey travel around the world, I want to meet good friends. My English is so-so but I think someone in here on this site will help me to improve it :)
1. Don't use abbreviated airline designation names. Not everyone knows what they mean.
2. Don't use contracted forms when writing essays. They are use for writing dialogs.
3. Superfluous. You have told us you are from Bangkok, Thailand.
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