My selfeducation training...

Hi, please try to correct my translations, in many cases I wasn’t sure if I should add some “extra” words (in brackets) or rather not.
1; William has bought a very expensive sports car.
威廉買咗（㗎）部好貴嘅體育跑車嘞。
2; I met a charming French girl at a garden party last Saturday.
上個禮拜六我參加嘅花園酒會見到（個）好有魅力嘅法國女仔。

上個禮拜六我參加花園酒會見到（個）好有魅力嘅法國女仔。

3; William has bought some flowers for his girl-friend.
威廉買咗啲花俾佢女朋友。
4; I met some very interesting people at a party last night.
昨晚我參加嘅酒會見到啲好有趣味(意思嘅人。
5; William has bought some wine for our party. (probably totally incorrect)
威廉買（咗）啲酒帶去我哋嘅酒會。This is right. 
威廉買（咗）啲酒幫我哋嘅酒會。
6; William Chan is a very talented opera singer of word-wide fame.
陳威廉又有天才嘅又世界有名嘅歌劇男歌手嘞。
定係
陳威廉（係）有天才嘅世界有名嘅天才歌劇男歌手嘞。

陳威廉（係）世界有名嘅天才歌劇男歌手。

 
7; These stones are very fine diamonds of great value.
呢啲石頭係啲好貴重嘅鑽石嘞。
8; The girl spoke with courage which surprised everybody.
（呢）個仔女仔講咗的嘢講得都每個人都被好驚訝晒嘞。

呢個女仔講咗的嘢講都個個都好驚奇。

9; William is particularly interested in the history of ancient China.
威廉最對古老中國歷史有興趣嘞。
或者
威廉好特別噉中意古老中國歷史嘞。

威廉特別中意中國古代歷史。

10; Dickens was a famous English writer who lived in the 19th century.
Dickens先生係（個）存在（喺）第十九世紀嘅有名嘅英國文學家嘅。

Dickens先生係十九世紀有名嘅英國文學家。

My selfeducation training...

Hi, please try to correct my translations, in many cases I wasn’t sure if I should add some “extra” words (in brackets) or rather not.
1; William has bought a very expensive sports car.
威廉買咗（㗎）部好貴嘅體育跑車嘞。
2; I met a charming French girl at a garden party last Saturday.
上個禮拜六我參加嘅喺個花園酒會度見到（個）好有魅力嘅法國女仔。
3; William has bought some flowers for his girl-friend.
威廉買咗啲花俾佢女朋友。
4; I met some very interesting people at a party last night.
昨尋晚我喺參加嘅酒會度見遇到啲好有趣味(意思嘅人。
5; William has bought some wine for our party. (probably totally incorrect)
威廉買（咗）啲酒帶去俾我哋嘅個酒會。
威廉買（咗）啲酒幫我哋嘅酒會。
6; William Chan is a very talented opera singer of word-wide fame.
陳威廉又有天才嘅又世界有名嘅歌劇男歌手嘞。
定係
陳威廉（係）有個好有天才天份嘅世界有名级嘅歌劇男歌手嘞。
7; These stones are very fine diamonds of great value.
呢啲石頭係啲好貴重嘅鑽石嘞。
8; The girl spoke with courage which surprised everybody.
（呢）個仔女仔鼓起勇气講咗嘅嘢講得令到每個人都被驚訝晒嘞好震惊。
9; William is particularly interested in the history of ancient China.
威廉最對古老悠久的中國歷史最感有興趣嘞。
或者
威廉好特別噉中意古老中國歷史嘞。
10; Dickens was a famous English writer who lived in the 19th century.
Dickens先生係（個）存在（喺）第十九世紀嘅有名嘅英國文學家嘅。

1; William has bought a very expensive sports car.
威廉買咗（㗎）好貴嘅體育車跑车嘞。