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Today is a sad day: Steve Jobs has died Steve Jobs passed away last night after having suffered for five years a terrible hopeless disease called Cancer. The first time I heard about Steve Job’s was last year at the University. We analyzed the success of iPod, the charismatic trait of Steve Jobs and how he became into a leader. Just after the class I realized that Steve Jobs was a genius and suddenly, I started to investigate on my own about his life and his whole career. The thing that most surprised me about his life was the fact that he never finished his studies at University. It means that he didn’t pass five years studying about how a mobile phone or any other gadget works. What is more, he only assisted to university classes during a month. So, definitely for me it is the step that marks the difference between people who are going to have a normal career in their lives and people like Steve Jobs who are going to be a reference for the first mentioned before. It’s not necessary to write that I really appreciate him, but over all what I really appreciate is his awesome talent. Because of his death, I had the opportunity to watch one of the most viewed videos today: the Steve Job’s announcement in Stanford University last 2005. This announcement was one of the best speeches I’ve ever watched, and I especially liked one of his sentences: “You can't connect the dots looking forward you can only connect them looking backwards”. With these words he tried to encourage people to do things that they really want to do without being worried about how these things are going to be connected with their future success. He was referring to that all is connected and is necessary to believe in this, destiny, karma whatever but it is necessary to trust on something for avoid frustration or desperation. Certainly, he was a wise men and why not mention? He was also a very supportive man who contributed to many social causes. Definitely, he has been a great loss. RIP Steve Jobs. (Anybody help me to improve and correct my mistakes?I would be very grateful. Thanks in advanced)

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Today is a sad day: Steve Jobs has died

Steve Jobs passed away last night after having suffered for five years at ravages of horrible terrible and hopeless disease called cancer. The first time I heard about Steve Job’s was last year at the University. We analyzed the success of iPod, the charismatic trait of Steve Jobs and how he became into a leader in the computer world. Just after the class I realized that Steve Jobs was a genius and suddenly, I started to investigate on my own about his life and his whole career.
The thing that most surprised me about his life was the fact that he never finished his studies at University he was a college drop out. It This means that he didn’t pass spend five years studying about how a mobile phone or any other gadget works. What is more amazing was that he only assisted to university classes during only attended classes for a month. So, definitely for me it is the step that marks the difference between people who are going to have a normal career in their lives and people like Steve Jobs who are going to be a reference for the first mentioned before. 1 What a huge difference those with college degrees and yet living a normal and drab life while one without such credentials rose to the highest peaks of imagination.

It’s not necessary to write that how I really appreciate him, not as a person but  but over all what I really appreciate is his awesome talent. Because of his death, I had the opportunity to watch one of the most viewed videos today: the Steve Job’s announcement n 2005 Stanford University speech last 2005. This announcement It was one of the best speeches I’ve ever I had watched. , and I especially liked enjoyed one of his quotes, sentences: “You can't connect the dots looking forward; you can only connect them looking backwards”. With These are the very words he tried to encourage people to do things that they really wanted to do without being worried having to worry about how these things are going to be get connected with their future success. He was referring to all that all is connected and is the necessary necessity to believe in. this, Whether it is destiny, karma or whatever but it is necessary the will to trust on something for avoid Just forget about frustration or desperation. He was certainly, he was a wise men and why not mention? He was also A very supportive man who contributed to many social causes. Definitely, he has been No doubt, a great loss to us all. RIP Steve Jobs.

Good eulogy.


(Anybody help me to improve and correct my mistakes?I would be very grateful. Thanks in advanced)

1.  Don't understand what you are trying to say.  So I am guessing.

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