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First notebook entry: Introducing myself glad to make good friends with u and share joy & pain in life !

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Your punctuation is not standard (so don't write like this on a test, lol)... but your meaning is clear and easy to understand. Well done. Good luck with your studies :D
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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

glad to make good friends with u and share joy & pain in life !

another way to express yourself more clearly:

I look foward to becoming good friends with you and sharing our experiences.

 

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First notebook entry: Introducing myself

glad to make good friends with u and share joy & pain in life !

 

it would be much better if you say it this way..

I would be happy to meet you, we could be friends through thick and thin!  :)

* thick and thin means good tiems and bad times.

 

hope this helps :)

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