Why children spend more time on watching TV ? How to solve the problem?

Research reveals that televisions have has brought significant impacts on children in recent years. Since children they spend more time on great deal of TV programmes, they are lacking of outdoor activities or recreations. In this essay, I aim to identify the probable sources of this problem as well as and provide some viable solutions to it.

From my perspective, one of the main reasons of the mentioned phenomenon is the increasing numbers and marvelous contents of good TV programminges, which are both caused by the made possible by advanced TV technologies. According to this, Thus kids are easily attracted by all kinds of programmes as to cartoons, soap operas and even advertisements. Equally importantly, though, TV watching TV is considered as an effective method in double income family to keep children safe at home. prevent children who were born in two-income families—parents both have jobs and cannot spend much time on taking care of their kids—from doing dangerous and hazardous behaviors. The third contributing factor of kidnapping boys and girls on the front of TV sets is lack of activities which are interesting and suit for children today. Therefore, watching situation comedies, like the Simpsons, is the last pastime for children at leisure. Finally, there are no alternative activity that suit children of today, hence children are captivated to shows like "The Simpsons".

In order to To address this problem, I personally believe that, first of all, parents should spare time to enter more outdoor activities with their kids who should be dragged out of TV programmes. spend more time with their children for outdoor activities instead of letting them sit in front of the TV.  Furthermore, active courses should be included in compulsory, for example, physical education and fine art. School subjects like physical education and fine arts should me made compulsory.  Last but not least, while there remains some disagreements on the contrary, I still contend parents have to control the span that their kids facing televisions and it must be the most useful and helpful solution. Finally, although there is some controversy over this, I still contend that it is the responsibility of parents to limit how much TV their children should be spending with.  This is the best solution.

In reality, my suggestions on this widely existed problem are oversimplified. However, if parents associated with school teachers realize these possibilities, children will have more opportunities to be released from the negative influences of the modern invention named TV.

 
In practice my suggestions are oversimplified.  However, if parents and teachers realize the potential of these ideas, children would be freed from this modern invention called TV.

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