人生について少し考えた
壊れやすいですね。
それが一瞬で消える方法。
あなたは注意を払っていますか？
私たちは石ではありません...
...ガラスの破片です。
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[Original text ]
A little thought about life:
How it's fragile, isn't it?
How that can go away in a second.
Are you paying attention?
We aren't stones ...
We're pieces of glass.
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Corrections · 2
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Wonderful.
それが一瞬で消える方法。
A bit unnatural. You haven't explained about the method （方法）.
それは何と一瞬で消えるんだろう。？？If you want to say the shortness of life.
あなたは注意を払っていますか？
OK and correct translation. But unfortunately, it is not poetic very much.
How about あなたは気をつけていますか？
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[Original text ]
A little thought about life:
How it's fragile, isn't it?
How that can go away in a second.
Are you paying attention?
We aren't stones ...
We're pieces of glass.
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