My ideal pen friend
Since I'm quite interested in English,I want to make a pen friend to get more improvement.My ideal pen friend should be of my age,and loving Chinese culture will be better.A girl or a boy who likes travelling and sports will be a good candidate.
In my opinion,A girl or a boy of my age has more same experiences as me and something to exchange.If possible,I hope that he or she likes singing.We can share our feelings of songs and even some movies.
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My ideal pen friend
Since I'm quite interested in English,I want to make a pen pal to help me improve.My ideal pen pal is/would be of my age,and someone interested in Chinese culture would be better.A girl or a boy who likes travelling and sports will/would be a good candidate.
In my opinion, a girl or a boy of my age has more of the same experiences as me and something to exchange.*If possible,I hope that he or she likes singing* (If possible, I'd like for my pen pal to be interested in singing).We can share our opinions about songs and maybe) even some movies.
**This sentence is correct, but sounds a bit awkward/weird/unnatural. I've put a suggestion in parenthesis.
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My ideal pen friend
Since I'm quite interested in English I want to find pen pal to help me improve.My ideal pen pal should be of my age and infatuated with Chinese culture. A girl or a boy who likes travelling and sports would be a good candidate.
In my opinion,A girl or a boy of my age has more of the same experiences as me and something to exchange.If possible,I hope that he or she likes singing.We can share our feelings for songs and even some movies.
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The more requirements you hold,the less friend you will get~~~ ^ ^
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