Hello everyone. Please, correct my mistakes.
Well, I rarely appear on my social media pages recently. I don’t know why, but in the summer I have the largest amount of work almost every year. Of course, I have some free time but I prefer to spend it in the park. Summer is so short in Russia and I’m enjoying every minute of it! By the way, the quarantine was finally canceled in Moscow. Miss you guys, I’ll try to appear on Instagram more often!
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Hello everyone. Please, correct my mistakes.
Well, I rarely appear on my social media pages recently lately. (This sentence works, but "Well, I haven't been appearing much on social media lately" sounds a bit more casual) I don’t know why, but I always (I think "always" works better than "almost every year" at conveying this sentiment, even if you haven't literally always had this much work in the summer. Still, "almost every year" works too :) ) have the largest amount of work to do biggest workload (this sounds a bit more natural, but there's nothing wrong with "largest amount of work to do" either) in the summer almost every year. Of course, I still have some free time but I prefer to spend it in the park. Summer is so short in Russia and I’m enjoying every minute of it! By the way, the quarantine was has finally been canceled in Moscow. Miss you guys, I’ll try to appear on Instagram more often!
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Well, I haven't been appearing much on social media lately. I don’t know why, but I always have the biggest workload in the summer. Of course, I still have some free time but I prefer to spend it in the park. Summer is so short in Russia and I’m enjoying every minute of it! By the way, the quarantine has finally been canceled in Moscow. Miss you guys, I’ll try to appear on Instagram more often!
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