Introduction Letter I’m writing to apply for the position of Neuroradiology Fellow. As neuroradiologist I’ve spent the last 2 years working at Pediatric Hospitals in Chile, because of my special co

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Carlos Robles Morales

Introduction Letter I’m writing to apply for the position of Neuroradiology Fellow. As neuroradiologist I’ve spent the last 2 years working at Pediatric Hospitals in Chile, because of my special commitment with Pediatric Neuroimaging. It’s an area of Neuroradiology that is not well developed in my country, for which I have acquired a special interest during my visiting fellowship in London 2017, where I learned from excellent professors and professionals, with whom I keep in touch until today. While I try to study and keep me updated in the topics in Pediatric Neuroradiology, participating in International Courses or on line conferences due to the current events, I think is my duty to my patients to do a Fellowship on the field, so I could give the best of my knowledge in my reports and the Fellowship in Pediatric Neuroradiology at your Hospital is the place to do so. Hoping that my application has a good reception Sincerely Carlos

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Introduction Letter

Dear Sir or Madam,

I’m writing to apply for the position of Neuroradiology Fellow.

I have spent the last 2 years working as a neuroaudiologist in Pediatric Hospitals in Chile because of my special commitment with Pediatric Neuroimaging.

This is an area of Neuroraudiology currently not well developed in my country, and for which I have acquired a special interest during my visiting fellowship in London, 2017, where I learned from eminent professors and professionals, with whom I still keep in touch today.

While I try to study and keep myself updated in Pediatric Neuroradiology, participating in International Courses or on-line conferences due to the current events, I think it is my duty to my patients to do a Fellowship in this field. In this way I could give them the best of my knowledge in my reports and the Fellowship in Pediatric Neuroradiology at your Hospital is the place to do so.

I hope that my application meets with your approval.

Yours sincerely,

Carlos

Introduction Letter

I am writing to apply for the position of Neuroradiology Fellow.

As a neuroradiologist I have spent the last 2 years working at Pediatric Hospitals in Chile, because of my special commitment to Pediatric Neuroimaging.

It is an area of Neuroradiology that is not well developed in my country, but for which I have acquired a special interest during my visiting fellowship in London 2017. There ~~where~~ I learned from excellent professors and professionals, with whom I keep in touch to this day.

While I try to study and keep myself up to date in ~~the topics in~~ Pediatric Neuroradiology, by participating in International Courses or online conferences due to the current events, I think is my duty to my patients to do a Fellowship in the field, so I can / to be able to give the best of my knowledge in my reports. I believe ~~and~~ the Fellowship in Pediatric Neuroradiology at your hospital is the place to do so.

I hope that my application meets with your approval. (<-- this sentence I copied from the correction below by Joe Grimes; I agree that this sentence sounds better here, with more confidence while remaining formal.)

Sincerely,

Carlos (apellido)

Sugerencia (para sonar más natural o, en algunos casos, para sonar más formal)

Corrección

Some questions in regards to the letter itself, since I also work in the medical field and have had to write application letters like this myself:

Why does this specialty interest you? What did you learn in your time in London that made you want to pursue further education with a fellowship? Clearly you have experience in the field already since you have been working at pediatric hospitals. Bring that out more. What other skills or experience do you have that you can offer to their fellowship program? What are your future career plans? What makes this particular hospital's program a good fit for you and what makes you a good fit for them?

It sounds like you have a solid interest in the field and have already been learning about it on your own through your work and through other educational opportunities. Out of curiosity, where is the program you are applying to? Since your application letter is in English, I'm guessing it's an English-speaking country.

Pues ¡buena suerte con la solicitud! Si tienes alguna pregunta, no dudes en hacérmela.

Thank you!!

As for the end of the letter, write something like "If you have any further questions about my application, I would be happy to address them"

You wrote " I believe and the Fellowship in Pediatric Neuroradiology at your hospital is the place to do so." You need to add why that is so. What is it about that fellowship? or that hospital that makes it a good place to do a fellowship. For example, its reputation, the doctors who work there, the fact that it is a teaching hospital, the research that the hospital has produced, etc. You want to show that you are now just applying to dozens of fellowships just to get a fellowship, but that you have done your research and think that this is a good fit for you (and the hospital too!) You also want to show that you are a good fit for the position they are offering.

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