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The protection of environment ( a graph composition) At the first glance at the picture,,so a large number of ships to catch fishes that until recently less and less fishes live in the sea. .However, less as the fishes are people disregard the phenomenon for they are in the pursuit of interest. we can't deny the fact that the biological cycle between nature and human has narrowed.And this proved painful.Not only people pursuit profit from the sea ,but also from the forest , land ,sky .Quantities of animals are going to be extinct.Trees on the mountain are hacked down . With the development of cities,many industries emit gas to the atmosp-here which has become polluted one.Thus ,nature gets revenge on human in turn.It rains acid rain and the sea level has been rised that threatened the coastal cities and people who live in there. All of these caused a crisis of pursuiting profit.We should begin to believe that the imporatance of the nature we live in ,and that protection meaures must be taken immedi-ately. Firstly,government should take the lead to encourage people to protect environmen--t and publish relevant policies about it. Secondly ,social supervison is great importance ,th--ose who are against the law should be responsible for their behavior. Thirdly, to enhace in-dividual qualities and to learn informative knowlege for protecting environment . Human liv--e in harmony with nature is not a golden memory.

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The protection of environment ( a graph composition)

First of all,such a large number of ships are fishing that now less and less fish live in the sea. However, people disregard the phenomenon for they are in the pursuit of profit.
We can't deny that the impact of humans on Nature has increased. This has proved painful. Not only do people pursue profit from the sea, but also from the forest, land, and sky. Large numbers of animals are going to become extinct. Trees on the mountains are being hacked down. With the development of cities, many industries now send harmful emissions into the atmosphere, which has become polluted.Thus, Nature gets revenge on humans. It rains acid rain, and the sea level is rising, threatening coastal cities and the people who live there.
Pursuit of profit is causing this crisis. We must begin to believe in the importance of the natural world we live in, and understand that protective meaures must be taken immediately. First of all, governments should take the lead in encouraging people to protect the environment and they should institute relevant policies. Secondly, law enforcement will be of great importance - those who break the law must be held responsible for their behavior. Finally, individuals must become informed, and gain knowledge of ways to protect the environment . Humans living in harmony with Nature must not become just a golden memory.

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