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travel or migrate Most of people think about to travel at least once, meeting, feeling new emotions, flavors and more things, some people think that those feelings came from our ancestors, which at the beginning travel from a place to other one, when they were nomads, they always were founding up and discovering new lands, hunting and feeling emotions, currently the people have been growing in the same environments and step by step they are getting used staying and doing whatever they do, although while you’re growing you have the chance to get your baggage and get travel either when you're studying or you’re working no matter how old you are you have the option to travel although sometimes when you travel you could fall in love of that new country and maybe you decide to remain there and start a new live with a new and exciting mores. However for some people stay in their own countries is not an options, countries which are in war for example. moving to other countries is a way to stay alive and give a better future to their children ironically this looks like the opposite which own ancestors did, they changed from nomadic to sedentary and they are going back that before was. I have been planning around 2 years to travel to Japan or other country, on the one hand I like the Asian culture, on the other hand I don't speak japanese, even though I would like to travel there, sometime I think it won't be a greadfull option because I won't interact as much as I like, but there are a lot of alternatives to my travel, for example Australia whose wildlife and beautiful beaches are amazing that could be a nice choice, also new Zealand whose has wonderful landscapes, lakes, beaches, mountains it has everything in both of then the English is a native language and I would apply the knowledge I'm getting and I would practice more indeed, I have never been in a country where their citizens don’t speak Spanish but I want to get that experience

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Hello from the States!

My corrections are in red below. Remember, when in doubt, short sentences are better. I know it’s easy to write long-winded sentences in the moment! But when you are done writing, make sure to go back and reread what you wrote.

Most of people think about to travel at least once. Traveling evokes feelings of many emotions by meeting other people, and tasting new flavors. Some people think that those feelings came from our ancestors, because which at in the beginning, they traveled from a one place to another other one, when they were making them nomads. They were always were founding up and discovering new lands. hunting and feeling emotions, Nowadays, currently the people have been growing in the remain in the same environments and step by step they are  get used to staying in the same place doing whatever they do. although you’re growing You have the chance to get your baggage and get travel either when you're studying or when you’re working. No matter how old you are you have the option to travel. although Sometimes when you travel you could fall in love of that with that new country. and  maybe you You might even decide to remain there and start a new live with a new and filled with new, exciting mores possibilities.

However For some people, staying in their own countries is not an options. For example, countries which are in war. In this case, moving to another other country is a way to stay alive. It also gives families a better future to for their children. ironically This looks like is the opposite of what our own ancestors did because they changed from went from nomadic to sedentary and now we are going back to that before was.

For about two years, I have been planning around 2 years to travel to Japan or another other country. On the one hand, I like the Asian culture, on the other hand I don't speak Japanese. Even though I would like to travel there, sometime I think it wouldn’t be a great greadfull option idea because I wouldn’t be able interact as much as I like. But there are a lot of alternatives. to my travel For example, Australia could be a nice choice with its amazing whose wildlife and beautiful beaches. are amazing that could be a nice choice New Zealand also whose has wonderful landscapes, lakes, beaches, and mountains. It has everything in both of them. the English is the a native language and I could apply my knowledge I'm getting and I would and practice more. indeed I have never been in a country where their citizens don’t speak Spanish but I want to get that experience.
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You should edit and revise paragraph one. Right now, the whole paragraph is ONE sentence. Read it out loud to yourself and you will hear where the commas and periods need to be. It is at least 5-7 sentences.

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