How I learned to make my dreams come true (Could you correct my note, please?)
Many people say that each person should have a dream. I agree. But nobody says how to make a dream come true. It sounds like it must happen in some magical way and the only thing you need to do is dreaming.
Ok, I had a dream. I wanted to see northern lights. But I live in Moscow and it’s impossible here. So I told everybody about it, I watched it on YouTube imagining, oh no, VISUALISING))) that I will see it in real. And you know what? One of museums in my city held an exhibition «The Arctic» and there was a big and very beautiful projection of northern lights. Of course I was there and saw it, hahaha))) I sat in front of it and watched. It was magical! At that moment I realized that if I want to see real northern lights I must DO something!
In half a year I saw it. I was so happy! I cried like a little girl watching it)) I was very proud of myself and felt like I was almighty!))))
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Many people say that everyone should have a dream, and I do agree. However, nobody defines how to make a dream come true.
It seems like making a dream come true must just happen in some magical way. The only thing you need to do is dream.
Ok, I had a dream; and I so wanted to see the Northern Lights. However, living in Moscow this is impossible.
So I told everybody about my dream to see the Northern Lights. I watched them on YouTube, imagining that I was there. This visualisation, however, just did not deliver, I so wanted to see the Northern Lights for real. I then discovered that one of the museums local to me had an exhibition called The Arctic. This exhibition included a big and very beautiful projection of the Northern Lights. I felt that I was there and experienced it. I sat at the front of the exhibition and watched. It was magical! At that moment I realised that if I wanted to see real the Northern Lights I must do something.
Half a year later, I experienced the Northern Lights. I was so happy! I cried like a little girl watching the lights; I was very proud of myself, as I really had made my dream come true
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How I learned to make my dreams come true (Could you correct my note, please?)
Many people say that each person should have a dream. I agree. But nobody says how to make a dream come true. It sounds like it must happen in some magical way and the only thing you need to do is dream.
Ok, I had a dream. I wanted to see the Northern Lights. But I live in Moscow and it’s impossible here. So I told everybody about it, I watched it on YouTube imagining, oh no, VISUALISING))) that I will see it in real life. And you know what? One of the museums in my city held an exhibition named "The Arctic" and there was a big and very beautiful projection of the Northern Lights. Of course I was there and saw it, hahaha))) I sat in front of it and watched. It was magical! At that moment, I realized that if I want to see the real Northern Lights I must DO something!
In a half a year I saw it. I was so happy! I cried like a little girl watching it)) I was very proud of myself and felt like I was almighty!))))
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How I learned to make my dreams come true (Could you correct my note, please?)
Many people say that everyone should have a dream. I agree. But nobody can tell you how to make a dream come true. It sounds like it must happen in some magical way and the only thing you need to do is dream.
Ok, I had a dream. I wanted to see The Northern Lights. But I live in Moscow and it’s impossible here. So I told everybody about it, I watched it on YouTube imagining, oh no, VISUALISING that I would see it in real life. And you know what? One of museums in my city held an exhibition called “The Arctic”and there was a big and very beautiful projection of The Northern Lights . Of course I was there and saw it, (hahaha) I sat in front of it and watched. It was magical! At that moment I realized that if I wanted to see real northern lights I must DO something!
After half a year I saw it. I was so happy! I cried like a little girl watching it! I was very proud of myself and felt like I had accomplished something.
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