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Part-time Job Whether students who are studying at universities should get a part-time job or not is a topic which is being hotly discussed. Some people say yes to it because they think it can cultivate students' social ability and help them understand their parents' hardship.But there are still some people who are against it. They consist that doing part-time is a waste of study time. Students should devote themselves into study rather than making money. In my opinion, a student can get a part-time job on condition that it doesn't interfere with their learning in classes. As a matter of fact, the good effects that part-job brings to students are more than the sides ones because doing part-time jobs can bring students more chances to get in touch with society.

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Part-time Job

Whether students who are studying at universities should get a part-time job or not is a topic which is being hotly discussed. Some people say yes to it because they think it can cultivate students' social ability and help them understand their parents' hardship.But there are still some people who are against it. They believe that doing part-time is a waste of study time. Students should devote themselves into study rather than making money.
In my opinion, a student can get a part-time job on the condition that it doesn't interfere with their learning in classes. As a matter of fact, the good effects that a part-job brings to students are more than the side ones because doing part-time jobs can bring students more chances to get in touch with society.
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Part-time Job

Whether students who are studying at universities should get a part-time job or not is a topic which is being hotly discussed. Some people say yes to it because they think it can cultivate students' social ability and help them understand their parents' hardship. [space] But there are still some people who are against it. They consist insist that doing part-time is a waste of study time. Students should devote themselves into study rather than making money.
In my opinion, a student can get a part-time job on condition that it doesn't interfere with their learning in classes. As a matter of fact, the good effects that a part-job brings to students are more than the negative sides ones because doing part-time jobs can bring students more chances to get in touch with society.

Really good piece of writing :)

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