I choose Donald Trump.
Imagine you could take place with another person for a whole day. Explain why would choose that person including many details as you can.
I choose Donald Trump.
I choose this person because is the richest man in the world. If I were he for one day I would have a lot of money and women and power.
If I would be the president the people would love me.
I will able to change the world. I would finish the war and the hungry in the poorest countries. I could firm a low for look after the planet while the bad businessman are going to the judge.
I would do all this in the morning.
In the evening after a delicious meal with my friends and girlfriends I am going to the beach to my private island with my helicopter. We will dance all together with my band of reggae.
Finally at night when I have done all that I love I going to retire in my mansion and practice meditation looking to the Moon. Then i'll think about the life and the present which has been given me.
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I choose Donald Trump.
Imagine you could swap places with another person for a whole day. Explain why would choose that person including as many details as you can.
I choose Donald Trump.
I choose this person because he is the richest man in the world. If I were him for one day, I would have a lot of money and women and power.
If I were the president, the people would love me.
I would be able to change the world. I would end the war and hunger in the poorest countries. I could make a law to care for the planet while the bad businessmen [plural] are brought to justice [llevar ante la justicia / ajusticiar].
I would do all this in the morning.
In the evening, after a delicious meal with my friends and girlfriends, I would go to the beach on my private island in my helicopter. We would all dance together with my reggae band.
Finally, at night, when I have done everything I enjoy, I would retire to my mansion and practise meditation looking at the Moon. Then I would think about the life and the present which has been given me.
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Nice work, Moisés! I'm not sure just being the president is enough for people to love you, but I like your plans for the day!
I corrected your tense a few times. Because this is an imagined situation, most of the time you want the conditional: "I would be able to", "I would retire", "we would dance", "I would end". "If I were the president" is called either the subjunctive or second conditional. You might find this helpful: https://learnenglish.britishcouncil.org/grammar/intermediate-to-upper-intermediate/conditionals-1
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I Choose Donald Trump.
Imagine you could swap places with another person for a whole day. Explain why you would choose that person including as many details as you can.
I choose Donald Trump.
I choose this person because he is the richest man in the world. If I were he for one day I would have a lot of women and money and power.
I would be the president and my people would love me.
I would be able to change the world. I would finish the war in Hungary and in the poorest countries. I would formulate a law to look after the planet while the bad businessman would go to the hangman.
I would do all this in the morning.
In the evening after a delicious meal with my friends and girlfriends I would go to the beach on my private island with my helicopter. We would dance all together with my band of reggae.
Finally at night when I have done all that I love I would retire to my mansion and meditate, looking at the Moon. Then I'll think about life and the present which has been given me.
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