How can i use an airplane and a helicopter in an emergency?
Hello guys👋😊 i am practicing my english i am trying to improve my writing skills. At the moment i just know hot to make an easy essay if it’s possible i would like your opinions below and corrections also of how can i write a conclusion for this essay. Thanks a lot for your time 🙏
Airplanes and Helicopters can be used to save people’s lives. Helicopters an be used for rescuing people in trouble. For example, medical emergencies, natural disasters, car accidents and to search missed people. Planes can transport food and supplies when disaster strikes as natural disaster like a big mudflow that destroy, houses, schools, environments and covers the road and streets so people could not go out from their refugies or escape from the rugged place to look for help or even food and water. Both types of aircraft can transport people to hospitals in emergencies. This is common when an accident happen far away from a hospital and the patient need to be attended the most quick as possible. Also not only for emergencies but helicopters and airplanes can be used to provide medical services to people who live in remote areas, like transporting a health personal or medicines for elderly and disabled people.
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How can I use an airplane and a helicopter in an emergency?
Hello guys👋😊 I am practicing my English and trying to improve my writing. At the moment i* just know how to write an easy essay. If it’s possible i would like your opinions below and corrections, also of how I can write a conclusion for this essay. Thanks a lot for your time 🙏
Airplanes and helicopters can be used to save people’s lives. Helicopters can rescue those in trouble, for example, medical emergencies, natural disasters, car accidents and to search for missing people. **Planes can transport food and supplies when disaster strikes, such as a natural disaster like a big mudflow that destroys houses, schools, environments and covers the road and streets so people cannot leave their refuges or escape from a rugged place to look for help or even food and water**. Both types of aircraft can transport people to hospitals in emergencies. This is common when an accident happens far from a hospital and the patient needs to be attended to as quickly as possible. Not only for emergencies, helicopters and airplanes can also provide medical services to people who live in remote areas, like transporting a health worker or medicines for elderly and disabled people.
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**This sentence became rather long. Normally a sentence has one idea only.
You do not need a conclusion in every essay. It is enough to describe, as you have, how these airplanes and ambulances help people.
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How can i use an airplane and a helicopter in an emergency?
Hello guys👋😊 i am practicing my english i am trying to improve my writing skills. At the moment i just know hot to make an easy essay if it’s possible i would like your opinions below and corrections also of how can i write a conclusion for this essay. Thanks a lot for your time 🙏
Airplanes and helicopters can be used to save people’s lives. Helicopters can be used for rescuing people in trouble. Some examples include medical emergencies, natural disasters, car accidents and to search for missing people. Planes can also transport food and supplies when disasters strike.
Both types of aircraft can transport people to hospitals in emergencies. This is common when an accident happens far away from a hospital and the patient needs to be attended to the most as quick as possible. Also, not only for emergencies, but helicopters and airplanes can be used to provide medical services to people who live in remote areas, like transporting a health personal personnel, or medicine for to elderly and disabled people.
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