자유 시간 ///
hey, i’m new to Korean, so could you please correct my mistakes? (without complicating the text too much)
저는 많이 공부해서 자유 시간이 없어요. 그리나 가끔 시간을 잡아요. 그럼 저는 자주 뒹굴어요. 때로 저는 책을 읽어요. 저는 좋아하는 장르 판타지예요. 저는 첫째 책이 새도후 헌처스옜어요. 그 총서에 책 여섯이 있어요. 열두 살이고 그 책들을 주일에는 읽었어요. 어렸을 때 많이 읽었어요. 그리나 지금 독서를 안 좋아해요.
저는 또한 그려요. 간혹 그려서 제 그림은 나빠요.
저는 한번 수 놓고 실험했어요. 이것은 안 접혔어요.
제 국가는 영화관이 없고 관이 두 개있어요. 관에 가고 아주 좋아해요. 지금 가고 싶어요. 하지만 격리는 있고 관은 닫아요.
그리고 제 국가는 바다하고 산은 있어요. 그래서 택하고 안 필요해요.
original text, just so that you know what i meant. please, don’t translate it and correct MY mistakes in korean instead. Thank you for your help in advance🥰
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I don’t have free time since i study a lot. But sometimes i do find it. Then/in such cases i often laze/loaf. Sometimes I read books. My favourite genre is fantasy. My first book was „The Mortal Instruments“ („Shadowhunters“). There are 6 books in this series. When I was 12 I read them all in a week. In my childhood i used to read a lot. But now i don‘t like reading.
Also I draw sometimes. Since i do it rarely, my drawings are bad.
I once tried needlework/embroidery. It didn‘t go well/ I didn‘t succeed in it.
There is no cinema in my country, but there are two theaters. I like going to them a lot. Now I really want to go there, but due to the quarantine they are closed.
As to my country, it has both mountains and sea, so I don‘t need to choose.
(a question was: „would you prefer sea or mountains?“)
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자유 시간 ///
hey, i’m new to Korean, so could you please correct my mistakes? (without complicating the text too much)
저는 공부하느라 자유 시간이 많지 않아요. 그러나 시간이 나면 뒹굴곤 해요. 때때로(때로 is also fine, but I think 때때로 is slightly better) 저는 책을 읽어요. 제가 좋아하는 장르 판타지에요. 제가 처음으로 읽은 책은 새도후 헌처스에요. 그 시리즈는 여섯 권 짜리에요(or 여섯 권으로 구성되어 있어요). 열두 살 때 그 책들을 일주일 만에 다 읽었어요. 어렸을 때는 책을 많이 읽었지만, 지금은 독서를 안 좋아해요.
저는 또한 그림을 그려요. 가끔씩만 그려서 잘 그리지는 못해요.
저는 한번 수 놓기에 도전했어요. 그러나 잘 안 됐어요.
제 나라에는(국가 sounds a bit strict) 영화관이 없고 연극장이 두 개 있어요. 연극장에 가는 것을 아주 좋아해요. 가고 싶지만 격리 기간이라 연극장이 닫았어요.
그리고 제 국가에는 바다와 산이 모두 있어요. 그래서 선택하지 않아도 돼요(or 선택할 필요가 없어요).
original text, just so that you know what i meant. please, don’t translate it and correct MY mistakes in korean instead. Thank you for your help in advance🥰
:
I don’t have free time since i study a lot. But sometimes i do find it. Then/in such cases i often laze/loaf. Sometimes I read books. My favourite genre is fantasy. My first book was „The Mortal Instruments“ („Shadowhunters“). There are 6 books in this series. When I was 12 I read them all in a week. In my childhood i used to read a lot. But now i don‘t like reading.
Also I draw sometimes. Since i do it rarely, my drawings are bad.
I once tried needlework/embroidery. It didn‘t go well/ I didn‘t succeed in it.
There is no cinema in my country, but there are two theaters. I like going to them a lot. Now I really want to go there, but due to the quarantine they are closed.
As to my country, it has both mountains and sea, so I don‘t need to choose.
(a question was: „would you prefer sea or mountains?“)
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