The unforgettable memories
I would like to write about my ' The unforgettable train' story😊. One day, me, my friends, my mother and her friends, we were decided to go for 'putloor' Kovil. We went by train, my mother's friend only got the ticket train for elders, elders like my mother and her two friends only bought the tickets of three, we didn't bought tickets of myself and my friends. The checker was came on the train, he said 'show me your tickets'. We were only bought the tickets of three, but we were here morever six. My mother's friend convinced the checker, she said ' my husband having the others tickets, he is there for other compartment while the train is stopping, I got the tickets from my husband and show you' the checker said ' okay'. We reached the station, the checker was waited there, my mother and her friends were got off the train, myself got off the other side, I was caght by checker. Do you know one thing, my mother ,her friends and my friends noticed the checker was there which side I got off, but I didn't saw the checker, because I saw my friend pair of shoes under the seat, so I caght by checker. I didn't know where was my mother and others. The checker asked me ' where is others?'. I said ' I don't know, am also searching my mom' , but the checker shouted me. That one secon, my mind was blank out. I think that time Iam studying 6th. Suddenly, I heard my mother's voice ' Sathya! where are you'. I said 'mom, I there in'. Finally the problem sort out.::)))
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I would like to write about my ' The unforgettable train' story😊. One day, me, my friends, my mother and her friends, and I we were decided to go for 'putloor' Kovil. We went by train,My mother's friend only got the 3 train tickets train for elders senoirs, elders seniors like my mother and her two friends. only bought the tickets of three, we She didn't boughtbuy tickets of myself for me and my friends. The checker was came on the train, . He said 'show me your tickets'. We were only bought the tickets of three tickets, but we were here morever more than six. My mother's friend convinced explained to the checker, she said ' My husband having has the others tickets, h He is there for in the other compartment. while the train is stopping, I gotWhen the train stops, I will get the tickets from my husband and show you'. The checker said ' okay'. We reached the station, and the checker was waited there,. My mother and her friends were got off the train, myself I got off the other side, and I was caught by checker. Do you know one thing, My mother ,her friends and my friends noticed the checker was there which was on the side I got off, but I didn't saw see the checker, because I saw my friend's pair of shoes under the seat, so I caght was caught by checker. I didn't know where was my mother and the others were. The checker asked me ' where is are the others?'. I said ' I don't know, I am also searching my mom' , but the checker shouted at me. During that one second, my mind was blank out went blank. (I think that time Iam studying 6th)sorry I don't understand the blue. Suddenly, I heard my mother's voice ' Sathya! where are you'. I said 'mom, I there in I am here'. Finally the problem was sorted out.::)))
If you find any mistakes, correct it. Hi, I hope these corrections help! We don't really say "checker". You can say "the person checking the tickets" or "the controller" or "the ticket collector". I understand bad luck on trains!
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