Short essay about Online shopping
The way of buying has significantly changed over the past few decades. The spread of the internet and the globalization system give us an immediate access to goods and services, that are produced in every part of the world.
Each person living in a developed country has probably, at least once in his/her life, bought something on the web. A big amount of the online stores sell their goods for convenient prices and ship most of customers' purchases without charging extra costs. For instance, the Amazon colossus delivers almost everything within one day, requiring only to pay a little amount per year. That is a huge benefit for those who want to save money. Moreover, if someone do not have the time to look for something in the stores around the city, it is really useful to receive it directly at home.
On the other hand, this system of purchases is having a strong impact on local shops. The harsh rules of the globalization tend to penalize those who are smaller, and who do not have enough resources to keep up with the market requirements. Many stores can be even forced to close if their income is not sufficient to pay all the expenses. I love buying online and I often do it. But, thinking about the consequences, sometimes I feel like I am not acting ethically.
In conclusion I believe that online shopping can improve the life-quality of buyers. However its reflects on the local economies may be extremely damaging. That is why our society should try to balance the needs of the consumers with the protection of local traders.
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Short essay about Online shopping
Ways of buying have significantly changed over the past few decades. The spread of the internet and globalization give us immediate access to goods and services that are produced in every part of the world.
Each person living in a developed country has probably, at least once in his/her life, bought something on the web. Many online stores sell their goods for convenient prices and ship most customers' purchases without charging extra. For instance, the Amazon colossus delivers almost everything within one day, requiring only to pay a little amount per year. That is a huge benefit for those who want to save money. Moreover, if someone do not have the time to look for something in the stores around the city, it is really useful to receive it directly at home.
On the other hand, this system of purchases is having a strong impact on local shops. The harsh rules of globalization tend to penalize those who are smaller, and who do not have enough resources to keep up with market requirements. Many stores are even forced to close if their income is not sufficient to pay all their expenses. I love buying online and often do so. But, thinking about the consequences, sometimes I feel like I am not acting ethically.
In conclusion I believe that online shopping can improve the life-quality of buyers. However its effects on local economies may be extremely damaging. That is why we should try to balance the needs of consumers with the protection of local traders.
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Short essay about Online shopping
The way of (buying)shopping/purchasing items has significantly changed significantly over the past few decades. The (spread) increased use of the internet and the globalization system have givengive us an immediate access to goods and services, that are produced (and sold) (in every part of) all over the world.
Each person living in a developed country has probably, at least once in his/her life, bought something on the web. A (big amount of the) large number of online stores sell their goods (for convenient) at attractive prices and ship most of customers' purchases without (charging extra costs) additional charges. For instance, the Amazon colossus delivers almost everything within one day, requiring only (to pay a little amount ) a small charge once per year. That is a huge benefit for those who want to save money. Moreover, if someone do does not have the time to look for something in the stores around the city, it is really useful to look for and receive purchases it directly at home.
On the other hand, this system of purchasesing is having a strong impact on local shops. The harsh rules of the globalization (I don't understand what you mean by the harsh rules of globalization) tend to penalize those who are smaller, and who do not have enough resources to keep up with the market requirements.(Can you give an example?) Many stores can be even forced to close if their income is not sufficient to pay all the expenses.(This seems normal for any business. DO you mean that the there is competition with online shops and small shops are losing customers so they are unable to pay there bills?) I love (buying) shopping online and I often do it. But, However, thinking about the consequences, sometimes I feel like I am not acting ethically.
In conclusion, I believe that online shopping can improve the life-quality of buyers the quality of life of shoppers. However, its reflects effectson the local economies may be extremely damaging. That is why our society should try to balance the needs of the consumers with the protection of local traders. (Good intro, advantages and conclusion. The confusing part was about the disadvantages. I hope my questions in that part help you)
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