my interest in the master's programme in management
My interest in the master’s programme in management is based on my career plan following my rewarding experiences in the accounting firm. I would like to switch my career from the sector of assurance to financial advisory. In a project in manufacturing where the client newly purchased a local company, I worked with financial advisory teams to address client's business issues in an optimal way.
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My interest in the master's programme in management (What kind of management?)
My interest in the master’s programme in management is based on my career plan following my the rewarding experiences in the I had in an accounting firm. I would like to switch my career from the sector of assurance to financial advisory. One of the experiences that drove my career switch involved working on In a project in manufacturing where the client newly had just purchased a local company, and I was working with the financial advisory teams to address the client's business issues in an optimal way (could also use "manner").
Notes:
Depending on where you are, "program" is the more common spelling.
If you want, I could also rewrite your notebook my way to give another perspective.
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my interest in the master's programme in management
My interest in the master’s programme (in USA - Master's Program) in management is based on my career plan, following my rewarding experiences in (could use "with" - it is very subtle, but can mean slightly different things) the accounting firm. I would like to switch my career from the sector of assurance to financial advisory (in the USA - would simply say, "from Assurance to Financial Advisory"). In a project in manufacturing, where the client newly purchased a local company, I worked with the financial advisory teams to address the client's business issues in an optimal way.
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