Holle!

My name is xuxiaoyan.My Englis is not good.So I want to study English.I want to go abroad to study. My hobby is drawing and reading books.I like Hanhan vrey much.I like his books. Although I can't understand at times. My dream is to be a painter in the future. 
 I will study English hard, also i hope guys here can  become my good friends! please cheer me up!

Hollo!

My name is xuxiaoyan.My English doesn't well.So I want to study learn English.I want to go abroad to study. My hobby is drawing and reading books.I like Hanhan vrey much.I like his books.Although I can't understand at times.My dream is to be a painter in the future.
I will study English hard, also hope and students become very good friends!please cheer me up!up me.

Hello!

My name is xuxiaoyan. My English isn't very good. So I want to study English. I want to go abroad to study. My hobbies are drawing and reading books. I like Hanhan very much. I like his books, even though I can't always understand them. My dream is to be a painter in the future.
I will study English hard. I also hope that me and students become very good friends! Please cheer me up!

Not too bad! :) Remember to put spaces after periods. Also instead of "cheer me up" you should say "wish me luck". If you say "cheer me up" that can mean that you are feeling sad or something and want people to make you feel better. Keep it up!

Holle!

Hello!

My name is xuxiaoyan.My English isnt too good doesn't well.So I want to study English.I want to go abroad to study. My hobby is drawing and read reading books.I like Hanhan vrey very much.I like his books.Although I can't understand at times.My dream is to be a painter in the future.
I will study English hard, also hope and students become very good friends!

I will study hard to learn english, i hope to become friends with other students.

please cheer me up!

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Your english is very good :)