Beautiful blue mornig
Today is a beautiful day. The blue sky is perfect to go out, to go to park or for a walk but i'm in quarantine. I and every brazilian people are in quarantine fighting with a viral crisis and a political and economical crises. We're really trying survive to all that - with memes of course
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A beautiful blue morning
Today is a beautiful day. The blue sky is perfect to go out, to go to the park or for a walk, but I'm in quarantine. I and every All Brazilians, people including myself, are in quarantine, fighting with a virus crisis and a political and economical crisis. We're really trying to survive to all that - with memes of course.
Olá Elisa, not bad.
I have cut out some repetition.
"I" always is with a capital letter.
Economic is an adjective - a crisis of the economy. Economical means you are being careful with your money!
Boa sorte with the fight!
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Beautiful blue morning
Today is a beautiful day. The blue sky is perfect to go out, to go to the park or for a walk, but I'm in quarantine. I Me and every Brazilian people person (1) are in quarantine fighting with a viral crisis and a political and economical crises (2). We're really trying to survive to all that - with memes, of course.
(1) Como você usou o "every", você tornou a palavra singular, pois esse termo funciona como um "cada", ou seja, cada pessoa brasileira;
(2) Eu reescreveria essa frase de modo a diminuir o número de vezes que se usa a palavra crisis, assim: "fighting viral, political and economical crises"
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