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The city where I lived? (Am I correct?) Tainan, the city where I was born and raised. It is famous for delicious food, night markets and historical sites, which attracting many visitors around the world.So that is has another name called ancient capital. Despite so many advantages, it has a share of problems, such as air pollution or traffic violations. Below I will propose my suggestions in hope of dealing with these problems. First of all, Tainan has many industrial areas illegally setting out lots of exhaust emissions.The government should keep tabs on it and make some laws to keep them from generating the exhaust emissions. Thus, our sky will be brighter, our body will be healthier, our environment will be cleaner. Except for this problems, the traffic violation is also a important thing to concentrate on. When we are riding, we need to wear safety helmets, follow the traffic signs and slow the speed.Besides, the government should enforce traffic regulations to protect our lives. To sum up, as long as we improve these problems, Tainan will be a good place to live.

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The city where I lived? (Am I correct?)

Tainan, is the city where I was born and raised. It is famous for its delicious food, night markets and historical sites, which attracting [many] visitors from around the world. So that It is has another name called the ancient capital. Despite so many advantages, it has a its share of problems, such as air pollution or and traffic violations. Below I will propose/make my suggestions in hope of for dealing with these problems.

First of all, Tainan has many industrial areas illegally setting out releasing lots high levels of exhaust emissions. The government should keep tabs on it monitor this and make some laws legislate to keep prevent them from generating the exhaust emissions. Thus If this is achieved, our sky will be brighter, our body will be healthier, our environment will be cleaner. Except for As well as this problems, the traffic violation is also an important thing issue to concentrate on. When we are riding, we need to wear safety helmets, follow the traffic signs, and slow the reduce speed. Besides, The government should enforce traffic regulations to protect our lives.

To sum up, as long as when we can improve solve these problems, Tainan will be a good place to live.
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The city where I lived? (Am I correct?)
The city where I live

Tainan, the city where I was born and raised.
It is famous for its delicious food, night markets and historical sites, which are attracting many visitors from around the world.So that is has another name called ancient capital. Also known as an ancient capital.


Despite so many advantages, it has a share of problems, such as air pollution or traffic violations.

Though these are positive aspects, there are also negatives ones. For example air pollution and traffic violations.

Below I will propose my suggestions in hope of dealing with these problems.


First of all, Tainan has many industrial areas illegally setting out lots of exhaust emissions.
There some illegal production factories, those pollute the air.
The government should keep tabs on it and make some laws to keep them from generating the exhaust emissions.
Responsable for the issue have to manage it and keep the control over the industries.

Thus, our sky will be brighter, our body will be healthier, our environment will be cleaner.

Except for this problems, the traffic violation is also a important thing to concentrate on.
I think that traffic violations is also an important issue to focus on.

When we are riding, we need to wear safety helmets, follow the traffic signs and slow the speed.

Besides, the local authorities should enforce traffic regulations to protect the citizens from traffic accidents and dangerous driving.
To sum up, as long as we improve these problems, Tainan will be a good place to live.
In order to make Tainan a better place to live , we have to solve those problems.
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I am so tired to check it, please keep words simple. You should read more articles and other IELTS essays. And please next time send the exercise or the question, it will help to check your essay. The city where I live Tainan, the city where I was born and raised. It is famous for its delicious food, night markets, and historical sites, which are attracting many visitors from around the world. Also known as an ancient capital. Though these are positive aspects, there are also negatives ones. For example air pollution and traffic violations There some illegal production factories, that pollute the air. Responsible for the issue have to manage it and keep control over the industries. Polluted air has a bad impact on our health, it causes a lot of diseases. I think that traffic violations is also an important issue to focus on. Besides, local authorities should enforce traffic regulations to protect citizens from traffic accidents and dangerous driving. Security and rules should be more respected and punishment for violators should be increased. I love Tainan and in order to make Tainan a better place to live, we have to solve those problems.

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