Hope everything will get better.
It’s been a very long winter holiday. Neither teachers nor students can go to the school due to the coronavirus. I haven’t been outside for almost forty days...
Even so, we Chinese people are always optimistic. Many of them including me would say: those bakery shops and those restaurants making noodles or pancakes can not survive after the situation because these days all of us have learned how to cook them at home :)
Anyway, I hope everything will get better, just like the sun shines today.
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Hi Liang, i hope this is resolved soon and am sorry to hear about the corona virus. The only corrections I see that are needed are Corona Virus as it is two words and the other is "can not survive after This situation." this is used here as the situation is still continuing.
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Great job in this paragraph too.
Hope everything will get better.
It’s been a very long winter holiday. Neither teachers nor students can go to the school due to the coronavirus. I haven’t been outside for almost forty days...
Even so, we Chinese people are always optimistic. Many of them including me would say: those bakery shops and those restaurants making noodles or pancakes can not survive after the situation because these days all of us have learned how to cook them at home :)
Anyway, I hope everything will get better, just like the sun shines today.
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Hi, your entry is well written, and easy to understand. However, I think that it can still be improved. I hope my suggestions help.
Hope everything will get better.
It’s been a very long winter holiday. Neither teachers nor students can have been able to go to the school due to the coronavirus. I haven’t been outside for almost forty days...
"we go to school" (without article) - and means we go there to have lessons or to teach, however, when you refer to the building or when you mean a certain school you can use the article. I go to school everyday but: all the schools in our area closed. The school at the end of the road is better than the school in the town centre.
I have replaced "can" -present tense- with have been able" - present perfect - because this situation started in the past and is still ongoing.
Even sothough, we Chinese people are always optimistic, Mmany of them including me would say: those bakery shops and those restaurants making noodles or pancakes can not survive theis situation because these days all of us have learned how to cook them at home :)
"Even though" links to sentences, so that they beome one.--> "... optimistic, many...."
Alternatively you could say:" ...those restaurants making noodles or pancakes will not be able to survive after this situation (or crisis) because all of us will have learned how to make pancakes at home."
(we talk about the future after the crisis, when no one will need restaurants anymore because everyone has learned how to cook).
Anyway, I hope everything will get better, just like the sun shines today.
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