Hello, Seven. I will make some corrections here for you.

大家好，我是来自中国的seven，我想与大家做朋友。H Hello, I am from China. You can call me seven. I want to make become your friend with you.

To use Make in this sentence it cannot be in relation to a specific person or people. For Example: "I want to make a lot of friends." or " I want make new friends at work".

However, if you're saying you want to be friends with someone specific you need to use Become or be. These are some examples: I want us to become friends. I want to be your friend. I want us to be friends. I want to become friends with Dave. We should become friends or We should be friends.

Now for this, 大家好，我是来自中国的seven，我想与大家做朋友。A more accurate translation would be.