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Nastya. So, this is my first note) I've decided to tell you smth about me. All dull, formal information you can find in me profile, that is why here I'm going ro write about my hobbies and how I prefer to spend my free time) To begin with, I'm a very energetic person and I can't stay at home without interesting things for a long time. Typically I spend my leasure time with my friends. They are all different,but I think it makes our relationships more interesting. I like clubs,bars and other places, where you ca meet cool people and dance all night long)) What is more, I like to sing and sometimes I perform on stage. Also I like reading books. My favourite authors are Levy, Picoult,Downham and a lot af russian writers. That isn't all,but I want to save smth for future=)

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So, this is my first note.  I've decided to tell you something about me. All dull, formal information you can find in me profile, that is why here I'm going to write about my hobbies and how I prefer to spend my free time.

To begin with, I'm a very energetic person and I can't stay at home without doing some interesting things for a long time.
Typically I spend my leisure time with my friends. They are all different,but I think it makes our relationships more interesting.
I like clubs,bars and other places, where you can meet cool people and dance all night long))
What is more, I like to sing and sometimes I perform on stage.
Also I like reading books. My favourite authors are Levy, Picoult,Downham and a lot af russian writers.
That isn't all,but I want to save something for the future=)

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The only mistakes I could see were

! Leisure.

2 Russian - always with a capital letter.

 

Хорошо (is that right?)

Good luck

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Спасибо)
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Сразу виден хороший уровень, а еще, что отлично натаскали на письма. Здорово! :)

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