Note#3.5
1. This year was various. But if write it in three words it will be 'just another year'.
2. What about achievements in this year I can't say 'I'm proud' of something. However, the fact that I finally graduated from an Institute can be called an achievement. May be.
3. I learned a lot this year. For example, I learned to use a graphics tablet and draw with it, as well as with paper. And use some new programs.
4. I can't say that any book or movie has "influenced" me lately. I read a lot of things and I don't remember how long ago I did it. But I watch movies very rarely. I watched "Good omens" this summer and it was funny!
5. During the year I bought a lot of things that I like. Most of all I like to go to stationery and bookstores. Also, I recently bought a shaggy warm sweater, which I have long wanted.
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Here are a few things that I noticed about your writing: "various" is probably not the best way to describe the year.. Maybe you mean full of different experiences? #2. "As far as achievements this year, I can't say that I'm particularly proud of anything (or of something in particular)." Also, 'maybe' is one word :) Hope that helps! And enjoy your warm sweater!!
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