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Describing Pictures Recently I've been trying to take some random picture on the internet and describe it, this is my fisrt try and I'd like to have a feedback on my mistakes and the way I'm aproaching it. I'd aprecciate any coment on it. Thank you Here is it There’s a couple on a train, they’re laying down on 3 seats, the guy is in the middle laying down under his mate who’s on the corner. At the background we have the corner of the train car, 2 windows and a door, a fire extinguisher and a photography who seems to be a touristic one, it shows a river and a red bridge. Throught the window we can see a forest full of trees. It’s a white girl with brown hair, she’s wearing a long grey cotton coat, black trainig pants, white socks and grey Nike shoes. The guy’s wearing a red waterproof jacket with black patches, a white t-shirt and a khaki pants. The girl’s huging the guy, putting her right hand on her boyfriend cheek, with both feets outside the floor, one’s on the seat and the other one on her boyfriend leg. The guy’s responding to her hug taking with his right hand the elbow of the girl and laying down his left hand on her leg.

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Describing Pictures

Recently I've been trying to take some random picture on the internet and describe it, this is my fisrt try and I'd like to have some feedback on my mistakes and the way I'm approaching it. I'd appreciate any comment on it.
Thank you

Here is it

There’s a couple on a train. They’re laying down on 3 seats. The guy is in the middle laying down under his friend who’s in the corner. In the background we have the corner of the train car, 2 windows and a door, a fire extinguisher and a photography which seems to be a touristic one. It shows a river and a red bridge. Throught the window we can see a forest full of trees.
The girl is a white girl with brown hair. She’s wearing a long grey cotton coat, black training pants, white socks and grey Nike shoes. The guy’s wearing a red waterproof jacket with black patches, a white t-shirt and a khaki pants.
The girl’s hugging the guy, putting her right hand on her boyfriend's cheek, with both feet off the floor. One’s on the seat and the other one's on her boyfriend's leg. The guy’s responding to her hug by taking the elbow of the girl with his right hand and laying down his left hand on her leg.

Very nice English.

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