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Does "loneliness" is good ? I have heard a lot of says about it ,good or not .the most two opinions I'v remembered is " loneliness can kill people " and " loneliness is a normal status of life " .
The first one support that comminucation is human’s instinct.if we are deprived of right of communication then what can be result of ? As we can see in prison ,satying alone in box is used as a ponishment to those who betray rules .And in a relationship, when you make your gf unhappy, deliberately or accidentally ,“cold violance " always happens.It is a mentale abuse unless you want break up already. So loneliness can kill people ,or late or early. But the second opinion argue that when you alone you can have more time for pleasing youself ,and it is important to have deep thinking always .you dont need bother to spend time in dealing with those meaningless things .
Loneliness in chinese is "Gu Du" ,the first " Gu" means alone and the " Du" means independence, so there are someone say " Gu" is a typical negative,so you should be " Du" instead of 'Gu". hmmmm........... I'm not sure .but I guess loneliness was forced at first .
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Is loneliness good? I have heard many things said about it, both good and bad. The two that I can remember are “Loneliness can kill people” and “Being alone is a normal state of life”. The first one supports the idea that communication is important, if not vital and natural part of human instinct, and if we are unable to do so, then it can be the death of us. As often seen in everyday life, but especially in prisons, being isolated from others is a punishment to those who break the rules. In addition, in a relationship, when you make your girlfriend (or boyfriend or partner or lover or significant other) unhappy, deliberately or accidentally, the “cold-shoulder treatment” always results. It truly is mental abuse unless you have already decided to break up!
Obviously, then, loneliness can eventually kill people. However, the second one suggests that being alone, which is different from loneliness, you can have more time for serious introspection, for discovering not only about yourself, but also about what you truly want out of life. In this manner, you do not need to spend nor waste time in dealing with those frequently meaningless things that often consume the majority of our lives. The term for “loneliness,” interestingly, in Chinese, is “Gu Du”, the first word, “Gu” means alone, and the second word, “Du” means independence. Some say that being “Gu” is typical thought of as being negative, so you should try to be “Du” instead!
Hmm…, I am not entirely sure about it, but I would guess that being isolated, separated, apart from others, was a way that societies enforced behavior from their members in the beginning.*
Hi, sr123. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. My sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you. Jonathan.
*Interesting viewpoints, thanks for sharing!
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The first one supports that communication is human’s instinct. If we are deprived of the right of communication then what can be the result of ? As we can see in prison ,staying alone in a box is used as a punishment to those who betray break rules .And in a relationship, when you make your gf unhappy, deliberately or accidentally ,“cold violance " always happens.It is a mental abuse unless you want to break up already. So loneliness can kill people ,or late or early. But the second opinion argues that when you are alone you can have more time for pleasing yourself ,and it is important to have deep thinking always . You don’t need to bother to spend time in dealing with those meaningless things .
Loneliness in Chinese is "Gu Du" ,the first " Gu" means alone and the " Du" means independence, so there are someone say " Gu" is a typical negative,so you should be " Du" instead of 'Gu". hmmmm........... I'm not sure .but I guess loneliness was forced at first .
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