Could you please correct this Review? I would like improve my written english to pass the CAE exam.
Ever since I was a ten years old kid I always loved listening to music, especially on television, and my favourite channel was "MTV". Despite the fact that it does not exist anymore as a fee television station, it gave me the opportunity to see, with a gap of one week between each one, the worst and the best video I ever saw, respectively " Obsesion" by " Aventura" and "Youth of the Nation" by "P.O.D.".
The song "Obsesion" opened with a slow-motion action of a man who seemed to be very worried about her beloved girl, then the music quietly starts and both music and video come together into something like a continuous and cryptic moan, that lasts for four minutes and thirty-five seconds.
In "Youth of the Nation" there was an intro scene with the band singing in a dark warehouse and behind their back, a big wall covered in pictures of kids. As soon as the amazing bass line started to one could immediately perceives that the topic would not have been happy. In fact, both music and video go on arm in arm, the first telling about different stories of different little characters, who lost his life in various and horrifying circumstances, while the second gave small fragments of each one. It matched the lyrics of the song perfectly.
To conclude, a song must always be followed by a coherent video, which has to match with the lyrics in order to give to the fans a clear and complete vision of the complex.
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Could you please correct this Review? I would like to improve my written english (English should be in capital form, "my English writing" means a writing written in English )to pass the CAE exam.
Ever since ("when"will be better)I was a ten years old kid. I always loved listening to music, especially on television, and my favourite channel was "MTV". Despite the fact that it does not exist anymore as a fee television station, it gave me the (a)opportunity to see (to see what? ), with a gap of one week between each one, It is he worst and the best video I had ever saw seen, respectively " Obsesion" by " Aventura" and "Youth of the Nation" by "P.O.D.".(I didn't understand)
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