I need someone who can assess the writing. Please leave a advice to correct error and improve further. This is based on a story which I had read last night. I have not written entire story. The author narrates a true story while on a visit to United States. It happened in one of the biggest cities in America, Newyork. It was a winter season, a worried mother and a child stood shivering on the roadside. The women was wearing an oversized dress, she was tall and had a scarf around her neck while her dress was shabby in appearance. A little girl was also seen with her who had a begging bowl in her hand, collecting alms from the kind hearted people.It was apparent that they were not from an affluent family. Also, on the other hand, she had a cardboard placard written "Suffering from cancer, Please help". Several passer-by overlooked them, but a gentle policeman stopped near, and asked them a few questions. The author tells that he took his wallet and gave whatever he had with him.