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a story in china I work in a top company, he works in a office in my opposite windows , we are separated by a street. Every day, i look at him secretly and guess his mood , then write it in a blog. He should not know it, because I always be carefull. One day he suddenly disappeared. Heart was empty, worte a new weibo: "he's gone, I miss him, but he don't know". a new comment appeared immediately: "silly child, I moved to the top layer ". Translation: 我在一个高层上班,他在我对面的窗户里办公,我们隔着一条街。 每天偷偷看着他,猜测他的心情忧伤,写在微博上。 他应该不知道吧,因为我总是很小心。 某天他突然消失了。 心里一空,发了新微博:“他走了,我想他,他不知道”。 立刻弹出一条新评论:“傻孩子,我搬到上面一层了”。

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a story in china A China Story 1

I work in a top for a company located in a high rise building. He works in an office in my opposite windows , we are in another building but exactly on the same floor with our windows facing each other, separated by a street.

Everyday, I look at him secretly in secret and try to guess his mood. Then I write it in a blog.

He should does not know it, because I am always be carefull. careful.

One day he suddenly disappeared.

My heart was emptyand I was crestfallen.  I wrote a new entry on Weibo worte a new weibo: "He's gone, I miss him, but he don't doesn't know". 

Then a new comment appeared immediately: "Silly child2, I moved to the top layer a higher floor".

Excellent essay!

1.  You should capitalize every first letter of a word in a Title.  Normally, you would say, "A Chinese Story".  However this is okay for titles, poetry etc.  Also this conveys to the reader that this story happened in China.

2.  This is ok but I prefer leaving it out.  In your original Chinese, you wrote, "silly child".

Translation:
我在一个高层上班,他在我对面的窗户里办公,我们隔着一条街。
每天偷偷看着他,猜测他的心情忧伤,写在微博上。
他应该不知道吧,因为我总是很小心。
某天他突然消失了。
心里一空,发了新微博:“他走了,我想他,他不知道”。
立刻弹出一条新评论:“傻孩子,我搬到上面一层了”。

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@mcaustria maybe it is a real story.it is from blog.
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hahaha....too funny! ...real Story? ...even funnier(*more funny)...how's the new guy? hehe
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thanks.i will write more.
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Ahhhhh young love. I hope it lasts

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