First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Thank you for pay your attention to me. I am a Chinese student and studied studying in Dalian University of Technology.  It is well_known to all of us a fact that every all students in China must learn English.  Althouth I am not good at learning Engilsh, I am deeply attracted deeply for to all kinds of colorful cultures 1.

I like to play soccer, make vedios videos,watch movies and dream of traveling all over the world.

You need to learn the rules of punctuation mark spacing.  See http://www.italki.com/knowledge/page/Mechanics%20Of%20The%20English%20Language.htm

1.  All cultures are interesting and colorful but may be strange to you.  You will be insulting someone's culture if you say they are not so.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Thank you for your attention to me. I am a Chinese student and studing in Dalian University of Technology.It is a fact that all students in China must learn English.Althouth I am not good at learning Engilsh,I am deeply attracted to all kinds of colorful cultures.
I like to play soccer,make vedios,watch movies and dream of traveling the world.

First notebook entry: Introducing myself

Thank you for your attention. I am a Chinese student and studied in Dalian University of Technology.It is well_known to all of us that every students in China must learn English.Althouth I am not good at learning Engilsh,I am attracted deeply for all kinds of colorful culture.
I like to play soccer,make videos,watch movies and dream of traveling all over the world.