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Could you please proofread? Since I was a little kid, I knew I wanted to do something about design. Although I've never thought of myself as an artist therefore I didn't want to study at Academy of Fine Arts, because I felt it was too traditional for me. Faculty of New Media Art at PJWSTK was a mix of art and new technology, which let me to develop my skills in many different ways.

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Would You Please Proofread My Post?

Ever since I was a child, I knew that I wanted to do something in the field of design. However, I have never thought that I had much artistic talent, so I did not want to study at the Academy of Fine Arts. Mostly, that was because I felt that the curriculum there would be much too traditional for me. That is why I opted instead to attend the Faculty of New Media Art at PJWSTK. It offered courses that were a mix of art and new technology, which allowed me—a person with no real artistic talent-- to develop my design skills in many other ways.

Hi, Kate. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. Sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you. J. 
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Could you please proofread?

Ever since [1] I was a little kid, I knew I wanted to do something about involving [2] design. Although I've never thought of myself as an artist, therefore, I didn't want to study at Academy of Fine Arts, because I felt it was too traditional for me. Faculty of New Media Art at PJWSTK was a mix of art and new technology, which let me to develop [3] my skills in many different ways.

  1. "Since I was a little kid..." suggests a reason or excuse. Ex: I couldn't ride the roller coaster since I was a little kid and didn't meet the minimum height requirement.
  2. This would be doing something "unspecified" in the field of design. Otherwise "about design" implies that you're somehow against it and want to do something to change the situation. Ex: I wanted to do something about global warming, so I stopped using products with aerosols and started biking to work.
  3. Or:"...which allowed me to develop"

Excellent work!
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