Could you please proofread?
Since I was a little kid, I knew I wanted to do something about design. Although I've never thought of myself as an artist therefore I didn't want to study at Academy of Fine Arts, because I felt it was too traditional for me. Faculty of New Media Art at PJWSTK was a mix of art and new technology, which let me to develop my skills in many different ways.
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Would You Please Proofread My Post?
Ever since I was a child, I knew that I wanted to do something in the field of design. However, I have never thought that I had much artistic talent, so I did not want to study at the Academy of Fine Arts. Mostly, that was because I felt that the curriculum there would be much too traditional for me. That is why I opted instead to attend the Faculty of New Media Art at PJWSTK. It offered courses that were a mix of art and new technology, which allowed me—a person with no real artistic talent-- to develop my design skills in many other ways.
Hi, Kate. Good job! Whatever changes I made were to allow your sentences to sound more natural to my native ears, to clarify your thoughts, and for ease of reading. Sincerest apologies if I have misinterpreted. I hope that this helps you. J.
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Could you please proofread?
Ever since [1] I was a little kid, I knew I wanted to do something about involving [2] design. Although I've never thought of myself as an artist, therefore, I didn't want to study at Academy of Fine Arts, because I felt it was too traditional for me. Faculty of New Media Art at PJWSTK was a mix of art and new technology, which let me to develop [3] my skills in many different ways.
- "Since I was a little kid..." suggests a reason or excuse. Ex: I couldn't ride the roller coaster since I was a little kid and didn't meet the minimum height requirement.
- This would be doing something "unspecified" in the field of design. Otherwise "about design" implies that you're somehow against it and want to do something to change the situation. Ex: I wanted to do something about global warming, so I stopped using products with aerosols and started biking to work.
- Or:"...which allowed me to develop"
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